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2014-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Lee sa bu was a pioneer to make Our dokdo belongs to Korea in the Sinra era. Money is adequate to buy the Opal. Each person has a different dimention so we should respect their opinion. He is popular for a critical gourmet. On inquiry,the usual suspect lied to an examining official. The movie that I recommend you is the "The road". It is about the Mobius strip. There is also a reversal like "Sixth sense" and "The usual suspect". THere I no awful scene,scary ghost but It is very hideous.

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Good evening TOM! Happy Friday again! You did a great job. Please go over the corrections below. I am so proud of you because you did your best. I am more inspired to help you improve your skills. Teacher Nina   Lee sa bu was a pioneer to make Our dokdo belongs to Korea in the Sinra era. >> Lee Sa Bu was the pioneer that made Dokdo belong to Korea in Sinra Era.>> OR: Lee Sa Bu was the pioneer that made Dokdo belong to Korea during the Sinra era. Money is adequate to buy the Opal. >> The money is adequate to buy Opal. >> OR: Our money is adequate to buy Opal. Each person has a different dimention so we should respect their opinion. >> Each person has different perspective, so we should respect it. ( dimension is about Mathematics ^^) He is popular for a critical gourmet. >> He is popular because of the critical gourmet. >> OR: He became popular because of his critical thinking to make a gourmet. On inquiry,the usual suspect lied to an examining official. >>  The suspect lied to an examining official during the inquiry of events. >> OR: The suspect lied to the officer when he had an inquiry of what happened. The movie that I recommend you is the \"The road\". >> The movie that I want to recommend is titled \" The Road\". >> OR: I want to recommend you the movie titled \" The Road\".It is about the Mobius strip. >> correct There is also a reversal like \"Sixth sense\" and \"The usual suspect\". >> There are also reversals lik \"Sixth sense\" and \"The usual suspect\".THere I no awful scene,scary ghost but It is very hideous. >> There is no awful scene, scary ghost but it is very hideous.

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