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Lee sa bu was a pioneer to make Our dokdo belongs to Korea in the Sinra era.
Money is adequate to buy the Opal.
Each person has a different dimention so we should respect their opinion.
He is popular for a critical gourmet.
On inquiry,the usual suspect lied to an examining official.
The movie that I recommend you is the "The road".
It is about the Mobius strip.
There is also a reversal like "Sixth sense" and "The usual suspect".
THere I no awful scene,scary ghost but It is very hideous.
강사 첨삭
Good evening TOM!
Happy Friday again!
You did a great job. Please go over the corrections below.
I am so proud of you because you did your best.
I am more inspired to help you improve your skills.
Teacher Nina
Lee sa bu was a pioneer to make Our dokdo belongs to Korea in the Sinra era.
>> Lee Sa Bu was the pioneer that made Dokdo belong to Korea in Sinra Era.>> OR: Lee Sa Bu was the pioneer that made Dokdo belong to Korea during the Sinra era. Money is adequate to buy the Opal.
>> The money is adequate to buy Opal.
>> OR: Our money is adequate to buy Opal. Each person has a different dimention so we should respect their opinion.
>> Each person has different perspective, so we should respect it. ( dimension is about Mathematics ^^) He is popular for a critical gourmet.
>> He is popular because of the critical gourmet.
>> OR: He became popular because of his critical thinking to make a gourmet. On inquiry,the usual suspect lied to an examining official.
>> The suspect lied to an examining official during the inquiry of events.
>> OR: The suspect lied to the officer when he had an inquiry of what happened. The movie that I recommend you is the \"The road\".
>> The movie that I want to recommend is titled \" The Road\".
>> OR: I want to recommend you the movie titled \" The Road\".It is about the Mobius strip.
>> correct There is also a reversal like \"Sixth sense\" and \"The usual suspect\".
>> There are also reversals lik \"Sixth sense\" and \"The usual suspect\".THere I no awful scene,scary ghost but It is very hideous.
>> There is no awful scene, scary ghost but it is very hideous.
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