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Hi there again Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for taking some time to answer your composition.
Silver eh? Silver looks gorgeous. For me, it looks more luxurious than gold. Seriously.
Actually, silver is more popular in my country than gold.
Anyway, take care and see you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you were a color, what would you be? Why?
If I were one of the colors, I would be a silver one.
>> correct!
It is also my favorite.
>> correct!
Silver is less twinkle than gold but it is awesome enough to bring me out.
>> Silver is less glittering than gold but it is awesome enough to make me a stand out.
Sometimes it is simple or flat, this character can make silver great when matching on a body or a cloth.
>> Sometimes it is simple or flat, and this character can make silver great when being matched to the body or the clothes.
I think silver could be chic and stylish if it was made a necklace or a ring.
>> I think silver could be chic and stylish if it being made into a necklace or a ring.
Actually, most of my accessaries are made of silver.
>> correct!
Even the necklace I am always wearing is silver.
>> correct!
It is not that special but can be point to fill empty spot.
>> It is not special but it can fill the empty spot.
In fact, I want to be a person like silver.
>> correct!
Even though I am not that luxury or magnificent but have something attractive enough to light around and myself.
>> Even though I am not luxurious or look magnificent but I have something which is attractive enough to make me a stand out among the people around me.
That’s the reason why I choose the silver color that I want to be.
>> correct!
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