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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day to you Tom!
Great! I can see that you are really working on your vocabulary skill.
Keep it up! I hope that you\'ll always remember how the words are used.
Try to make a notebook and write the meaning of the words there.
During your free time, you can read it. It will really help you improve your skills.
I believe in your abilities. Good night. Take a lot of rest.
I am excited to have a class with you again.
Teacher Nina
He is jealous her because she is richer than him.
>> He is jealous of her because she is richer than him.
Exercising burns up many calories.
>> Exercising burns a lot of calories.
He is the most popular playwright around the world.
>> correct
When we are on elementery school students,We must have a lot of leisure.
>> When we were in elementary, we had a lot of leisure time.
>> OR: When we were an elementary student, we had a lot of leisure.
>> OR: We had a lot of leisure time when we are an elementary student.
I canafordable that clothes cheeper.
>> Did you mean: I can afford those cheap clothes.
>> OR: Those clothes are affordable.
John williams is the most famous composer in the world.
>> correct
>> OR: John Williams is the most famous composer around the globe.
>> OR: John Williams is a well-known composer around the globe.
He always makes a song of the movie made by Steven spielberge.
>> He always composes a song for the movies made by Steven Spielberge.
>> OR: He always make songs for the movies that are made by Steven Spielberge.
One of his famous songs are Marching emperial,OST os Jurrassic park and Jaws.
>> Examples of his famous songs are Marching Emperial, OST of Jurassic Park and Jaws.
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