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2014-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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THe background of the horror movie almost the isolated island or town. The King sejong is one of the most tolerant person in the history of Korea. I'm so grateful because you save my life. An Chang Ho wanted the korea that without the japan'sinterferance and independente. THe volunteers that join the 'Saving Ship"almost died because of the natsunami. THe school trip was very fun. WE slept at hotel.We went to the maze and JAM. WE made the air rocket that fly almost 70 meter height. It will be the most valuable memory of my life.

강사 첨삭

Welcome back again TOM!

I am so happy to hear your ideas in class again.

You did a good job with your sentences.
Let us work on your sentence pattern and choice of words.

I encourage you to use a notebook and write the words that you learned, the meaning and example sentences.

So, during your free time, you can read it. It will really help you a lot.

Thanks for sharing about your fieldtrip. ^^ I am so happy that you had fun.
Good night. Sweet dreams. ^^

Teacher Nina


THe background of the horror movie almost the isolated island or town.

>> The place where the horror movie was taken was an isolated town or island.
The King sejong is one of the most tolerant person in the history of Korea.

>> King Sejong was one of the most tolerant person in the history of Korea.
I\'m so grateful because you save my life.

>> I\'m so grateful because you saved my life.
An Chang Ho wanted the korea that without the japan\'sinterferance and independente.

>> Did you mean: An Chang Ho wanted Korea to be independent without Japan\'s interference.
THe volunteers that join the \'Saving Ship\"almost died because of the natsunami.

>> The volunteers that joined the \" Saving Shop\" almost died because of the Tsunami. 

THe school trip was very fun.

>> Correct
WE slept at hotel.

>> We slept in a hotel.

We went to the maze and JAM.

>> Correct 
WE made the air rocket that fly almost 70 meter height.

>> We made an air rocket that flew almost seventy meters high. 
It will be the most valuable memory of my life.

>> It is the most valuable memory in my life.  

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