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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Welcome back again TOM!
I am so happy to hear your ideas in class again.
You did a good job with your sentences.
Let us work on your sentence pattern and choice of words.
I encourage you to use a notebook and write the words that you learned, the meaning and example sentences.
So, during your free time, you can read it. It will really help you a lot.
Thanks for sharing about your fieldtrip. ^^ I am so happy that you had fun.
Good night. Sweet dreams. ^^
Teacher Nina
THe background of the horror movie almost the isolated island or town.
>> The place where the horror movie was taken was an isolated town or island.
The King sejong is one of the most tolerant person in the history of Korea.
>> King Sejong was one of the most tolerant person in the history of Korea.
I\'m so grateful because you save my life.
>> I\'m so grateful because you saved my life.
An Chang Ho wanted the korea that without the japan\'sinterferance and independente.
>> Did you mean: An Chang Ho wanted Korea to be independent without Japan\'s interference.
THe volunteers that join the \'Saving Ship\"almost died because of the natsunami.
>> The volunteers that joined the \" Saving Shop\" almost died because of the Tsunami.
THe school trip was very fun.
>> Correct
WE slept at hotel.
>> We slept in a hotel.
We went to the maze and JAM.
>> Correct
WE made the air rocket that fly almost 70 meter height.
>> We made an air rocket that flew almost seventy meters high.
It will be the most valuable memory of my life.
>> It is the most valuable memory in my life.
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