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Wonderful job, Tom!
Wow! I can see that you are getting used with the words I give you in class.
Don\'t forget to be careful with how the words are used, okay?
Keep it up! More words to come. Hihihihi.
I am excited to see the picture. I can\'t wait. ^^
Talk to you tomorrow. Please go over the corrections I gave you.
Always remember that you can do better.
Teacher Nina
My colleagues betray me when I am in trouble.
>> My colleagues betrayed me when I was in trouble.
>> OR: My colleagues betrays me when I am in trouble.
THe scenery is so cool that I almost faint.
>> The scenery was so cool that I almost fainted.
I apologize to you truly.
>> I apologize.
>> OR: I am so sorry.
My friend told me that It will be the traditional elimination chamber championship match.
>> correct
I grant you to promotion.
>> I will grant you the promotion.
My friend sent me a picture of a famous champion belt.
>> My friend sent me a picture of a famous championship belt.
It is called \"the world heavy weight champion\".
>> Did you mean: It is called, \"The world heavy weight championship award\".
It is all gold and beautiful.
>> correct
>> OR: It is pure of gold and beautiful.
I will show you the picture of that belt.
>> correct
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