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2014-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

My colleagues betray me when I am in trouble. THe scenery is so cool that I almost faint. I apologize to you truly. My friend told me that It will be the traditional elimination chamber championship match. I grant you to promotion. My friend sent me a picture of a famous champion belt. It is called "the world heavy weight champion". It is all gold and beautiful. I will show you the picture of that belt.

강사 첨삭

Wonderful job, Tom!

Wow! I can see that you are getting used with the words I give you in class.
Don\'t forget to be careful with how the words are used, okay?

Keep it up! More words to come. Hihihihi.

I am excited to see the picture. I can\'t wait. ^^

Talk to you tomorrow. Please go over the corrections I gave you.

Always remember that you can do better.
Teacher Nina


My colleagues betray me when I am in trouble.

>> My colleagues betrayed me when I was in trouble.

>> OR: My colleagues betrays me when I am in trouble.
THe scenery is so cool that I almost faint.

>> The scenery was so cool that I almost fainted.
I apologize to you truly.

>> I apologize.
>> OR: I am so sorry.

My friend told me that It will be the traditional elimination chamber championship match.

>> correct
I grant you to promotion.

>> I will grant you the promotion.


My friend sent me a picture of a famous champion belt.

>> My friend sent me a picture of a famous championship belt.
It is called \"the world heavy weight champion\".

>> Did you mean: It is called, \"The world heavy weight championship award\".
It is all gold and beautiful.

>> correct

>> OR: It is pure of gold and beautiful.
I will show you the picture of that belt.

>> correct

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