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2014-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I;m so afraid of eating food. I will encourage you even you fail the test. May I borrow your notes? WE should be friendly to others for relationship. Don't be shy.when You will shy I will deduct 50 pointes. I watched the movie tittled "Interstella". It is all about space and also time. There were a lot of rule of famous people. For example,Murphy'law,quantum theory and theory of relativity.

강사 첨삭

Happy hump day TOM!
Wow! I can say that you are really doing your best to compose comprehensive sentences.

Keep it up! We are really working on your grammar and vocabulary skills.

I want to watch that movie, maybe this weekend.

There are really a lot of theories especially when you study Physics.
I am sure that you will like that subject.

Have a great night. Don\'t forget to go over your corrections, okay?

Talk to you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina


I;m so afraid of eating food.

>> correct

>> OR: I\'m so afraid to eat unusual food.
I will encourage you even you fail the test.

>> I will encourage you even if you fail the test.
>> OR: I will encourage you more if you fail the test.

May I borrow your notes?

>> correct
WE should be friendly to others for relationship.

>> Did you mean: We should be friendly to others to have a good relationship.
Don\'t be shy.when You will shy I will deduct 50 pointes.

>> Don\'t be shy, if you\'ll be I will deduct fifty points from you.

I watched the movie tittled \"Interstella\".

>> I watched the movie titled \"Interstellar\".
It is all about space and also time.

>> correct
There were a lot of rule of famous people.

>> Did you mean: There were a lot of theories made by famous people. 

>> OR: Famous people made a lot of theories.
For example,Murphy\'law,quantum theory and theory of relativity.

>> For example. Murphy\'s law, Quantum Theory and Theory of Relativity.

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