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Hello TOM ^^

Good evening.

Thank you for doing your homework and writing an essay.

You did a terrific job,

I think you were a bit confused on the usage of words.

Please go over the corrections below.

There were some sentences that was tricky. ^^

If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.
Teacher Nina

I felt isolated during the drift for 20045 days.(?)

>> Did you mean: I felt isolated during the drill. 

>> OR: I felt isolated during the drill for 20045 days.
THe smell from my friends feet was terrible.

>> The smell of my friends feet was terrible.
Be polite to others.

>> correct
I think he is so tolerant to others.so that is problem.

>> I think he is so tolerant to others so that is a problem.
>> OR: I think he is so tolerant towards others so that might be the problem.
The question of CSAT this year was a problem.

>> Did you mean:The question of the CSAT test this year was a problem. 


The test of CSAT part English was a problem.

>> The English part of the CSAT test was a problem.
There were a wrong question there.

>> There were wrong questions there. 

>> OR: They gave wrong questions.
THe young alumnus of MIT that get a gob of SAMSUNG try to solve that question.

>> Did you mean: The young alumni of MIT who is working at Samsung tried to solve that questions.
And geuss what he said.

>> correct ( spelling check: guess ^^)
He said like this\"This qeustion is nonexistent.How can the student of Korea solve this qeustion?

>> Did you mean: He said, \" This question isn\'t related to the topic. How can a student in Korea solve this question?\"

>> OR: He said. \'This question is irrelevant. How can a student in Korea solve this question?\"

THat is impossible.

>> correct

No one can solve this qeustion.\"

>> correct ( spelling check: question ^^ )
And think the college of the student.

>> Did you mean: And the college students think about it.