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Good evening TOM and happy Monday again!

Thanks for doing your best.

I noticed that you are really trying to compose good sentences.

However, don\'t use words that are not suitable for your sentence.

It is because it changes the meaning of your sentence.

Please go over the corrections below.

I will ask about your sentences in our next class.

Take care. Good night. ^^

Teacher Nina

Do not make any left over food.If you do,you will see the situation that I bring you to the brink if ruin.

>> Did you mean: Do not leave any left over food. If you do, you will see the situation that I will bring you to the brink that is ruined.
There are two tipes of smoge.

>> There are two types of smog.
The mirror reflects the light so when we see it uplight your eyes can damage.

>> The mirror reflects the light, so when we see it upright our eyes will be damaged.
THe robot influenced the liquid to my body.

>> Did you mean: The robot influenced the liquid to spark. (What do you mean with this sentence? ) 

>> OR: The robot was influenced by the advancing technology.
I worked on the analysis of Quantum theory.

>> I worked on the analysis of the Quantum theory. 


I hve made the bottle of Klein.

>> I made a Klein bottle.  
It is a bit same with the Mobius strip.

>> It is a bit the same with the Mobius strip.
It is hard to describe because the inside of the bottle was twisted very difficulty.

>> Did you mean: It is hard to describe because inside of the bottle was twisted.