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Tom!
Congratulations again!
I am so proud of you, as always.
Thanks for always giving your best shot everyday.
Please go over the corrections below.
Always be careful with the words you use, okay?
Good night and sweet dreams. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
The supply is so less.
>> The supply is few.
He is the most religous person I ever seen.
>> He is the most religious person I know.
The B5 wildlife in Africa are buffalo,elephant,leopard,rhino and lion.
>> The B5 wildlife in Africa are buffalo, elephant, leopard, rhino and lion.
I always read \"daily life\" in the morning.
>> correct
I am realy serious.Stop joking.
>> correct
You can ride the \"Millennium force\".
>> correct
It is the scariest roler coaster that netizon elected.
>> it is the scariest roller coaster that netizens voted.
It is 90M tall and almost nose dive.
>> Did you mean: It is 90 meters tall and it is steep.
>> OR: It is ninety meters tall and it has a nose dive.
It is parts of Cedar Point.
>> It is a part of the Cedar point.
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