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2014-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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big modern tall very hard comfortable good nice heavy interested warm/. There is a song named "History of everything'. It is good and useful. The parts that I realy memorable is this. "It 's expanding ever outward but one day,It will cause the stars to go the other way,collapsing ever inward,We won't be there it won't be hurt.Our best and brightest figure that it'll make an even bigger bang!".

강사 첨삭

Hi Tom!

I hope that you will feel better soon.

Thank you for having the class even if you are not feeling good.
I really appreciate it a lot.

I think you were confused with your homework.

Please go over the corrections below.

Have a wonderful night and weekend.

Take Care!
Teacher Nina


big

>> bigger
modern

>> more modern
tall

>> taller
very hard

>> harder
comfortable
>> more comfortable

good

>> better
nice

>> nicer
heavy

>> heavier
interested

>> more interesting
warm/.
>> warmer

There is a song named \"History of everything\'.

>> There is a song titled \"History of everything\".
It is good and useful.

>> correct  
The parts that I realy memorable is this.

>> The lyric that I really remember is this:
\"It \'s expanding ever outward but one day,It will cause the stars to go the other way,collapsing ever inward,

>> correct  

We won\'t be there it won\'t be hurt.

>> We won\'t be there it won\'t hurt.

Our best and brightest figure that it\'ll make an even bigger bang!\".

>> correct  

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