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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there again TOM!
I can see that you are doing well in composing sentences.
I am so happy that you are always open for corrections and suggestions that will help you improve.
There are a lot of ways to remember words.
I was really scared when you showed me the video.
I think I should watch it.
Can you please give me the title of the movie?
Oh my god. Time is really fast these days.
I hope that you will still continue learning English.
Teacher Nina
I leaarned the word accountant.
>> I learned the word \"Accountant\" today.
It is the visible sign that I ever seen.
>> It is the visible sign that I have ever seen.
I am worried about that.
>> correct
I always look carefree.
>> correct
>> OR: I always look careless.
The colleague betrayed to save his own life.
>> The colleague betrayed his co-workers to save his own life.
my friends said that the eyes that I showed you before was a trailer of a tape that closed to the people.
>> Did you mean: My friends said that the eye that I showed you before was a trailer of a tape that was shown to the people.
It is scary and create an air of anxiety.
>> It is scary and it makes you anxious.
My friends said when we see it more than five minutes we will be obsessed.
>> My friends said, when we watch it more than five minutes we will be obsessed.
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