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2014-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I leaarned the word accountant. It is the visible sign that I ever seen. i am worried about that. I always look carefree. The colleague betrayed to save his own life. my friends said that the eyes that I showed you before was a trailer of a tape that closed to the people. It is scary and create an air of anxiety. My friends said when we see it more than five minutes we will be obsessed.

강사 첨삭

Hello there again TOM!

I can see that you are doing well in composing sentences.

I am so happy that you are always open for corrections and suggestions that will help you improve.

There are a lot of ways to remember words.

I was really scared when you showed me the video.

I think I should watch it.
Can you please give me the title of the movie?

Oh my god. Time is really fast these days.

I hope that you will still continue learning English.

Teacher Nina


I leaarned the word accountant.

>> I learned the word \"Accountant\" today.
It is the visible sign that I ever seen.

>> It is the visible sign that I have ever seen. 
I am worried about that.

>> correct
I always look carefree.

>> correct

>> OR: I always look careless.
The colleague betrayed to save his own life.

>> The colleague betrayed his co-workers to save his own life.



my friends said that the eyes that I showed you before was a trailer of a tape that closed to the people.

>> Did you mean: My friends said that the eye that I showed you before was a trailer of a tape that was shown to the people.
 It is scary and create an air of anxiety.

>> It is scary and it makes you anxious.
My friends said when we see it more than five minutes we will be obsessed.

>> My friends said, when we watch it more than five minutes we will be obsessed.

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