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2014-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

He looked a agitated symptom and died yesterday. banker should be good at math because they must caculate the money. Mr salt threat that he is very furious. It was huge and heavy. "What is the abbreviation of the Association of southeast Asia nations?"Minho asks Mr lee says "It is ASEAN.' If it will happen like the movie tittled Invation? It will be terrible. Everyone became a different people and the world become hell.... But maybe that virus is being somewhere in the earth.

강사 첨삭

Good evening TOM ^^

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR EXTENDING YOUR CLASS AGAIN.

Please extend my gratitude to your parents.
Tell them that teacher is really thankful for giving me the opportunity to be your teacher again.

Anyway, you did great with your sentences.

However, there are still some lapses with your word order and choice of words.

Always be guided by the corrections below.
Don\'t forget to write the new words you learned in a notebook and review them as often as you can.

It will really help you a lot.

Am I right? The movie titled, \"Invasion\"?

It\'s a new movie for me. hahaha.
I\'ll check it this weekend.  Good night and sweet dreams.

Teacher Nina


He looked a agitated symptom and died yesterday.

>> Did you mean:  He looked agitated before he died yesterday. 
banker should be good at math because they must caculate the money.

>> A banker should be good at Math because they calculate money. ( capitalization: Math ^^)
Mr salt threat that he is very furious.

>> Did you mean: Mr. [Name] was a threat because he is very furious.
It was huge and heavy.

>> correct

>> OR: It was big and heavy,
\"What is the abbreviation of the Association of southeast Asia nations?\"Minho asks Mr lee says \"It is ASEAN.\'

>> Minho asked, \" What is the abbreviation of Association of Southeast Asian Nations?\" And Mr. Lee said, \"It is ASEAN\". ( capitalization: Association of Southeast Asian Nations ^^) 


If it will happen like the movie tittled Invation?  It will be terrible.

>> Did you mean: If it will happen like in the movie titled \"Invasion\", it will be terrible.
Everyone became a different people and the world become hell....

>> Everyone became a different person and the world became hell.
But maybe that virus is being somewhere in the earth.

>> But maybe the virus is somewhere in the Earth. ( capitalization: Earth ^^)
>> OR: But maybe the virus originated somewhere in the globe.

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