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2014-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There are many Monetary unit around the world. There is a program called 'Killing anger". He is a tutar from france. Excuse me,Where is the post office? he has a mannerism that bite his nails. I never get a sunlight. So I am in blue so much. I should get a vitamin D but now I can't recieve a sunlight. It is dark and rainy here.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon TOM ^^

Wow! You did your homework early. Hihihihi. Great!

I encourage you to go over the corrections below.

Always be careful with your sentence pattern.

Keep yourself warm and eat fruits that are rich in Vitamin C.

I hope that you are having a great day.

I am excited to talk to you.

Teacher Nina


There are many Monetary unit around the world.

>> correct  ( monetary shouldn\'t be capitalized. ^^)
There is a program called \'Killing anger\".
>> There is a program titled, \"Killing Anger\".  ( capitalization: Killing Anger)

He is a tutar from france.

>> He is a tutor from France. ( capitalization: France ^^)
Excuse me,Where is the post office?

>> Correct
he has a mannerism that bite his nails.

>> He has a mannerism, he bites his nails.


I never get a sunlight.

>> Correct 
So I am in blue so much.

>> So I feel blue.
>> OR: I feel really blue.
>> OR: I feel gloomy.

I should get a vitamin D but now I can\'t recieve a sunlight.

>> I should receive Vitamin D but I can\'t receive sunlight now. 
It is dark and rainy here.

>> Correct

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