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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon TOM ^^
Wow! You did your homework early. Hihihihi. Great!
I encourage you to go over the corrections below.
Always be careful with your sentence pattern.
Keep yourself warm and eat fruits that are rich in Vitamin C.
I hope that you are having a great day.
I am excited to talk to you.
Teacher Nina
There are many Monetary unit around the world.
>> correct ( monetary shouldn\'t be capitalized. ^^)
There is a program called \'Killing anger\".
>> There is a program titled, \"Killing Anger\". ( capitalization: Killing Anger)
He is a tutar from france.
>> He is a tutor from France. ( capitalization: France ^^)
Excuse me,Where is the post office?
>> Correct
he has a mannerism that bite his nails.
>> He has a mannerism, he bites his nails.
I never get a sunlight.
>> Correct
So I am in blue so much.
>> So I feel blue.
>> OR: I feel really blue.
>> OR: I feel gloomy.
I should get a vitamin D but now I can\'t recieve a sunlight.
>> I should receive Vitamin D but I can\'t receive sunlight now.
It is dark and rainy here.
>> Correct
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