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A marvelous evening to you, TOM!
Happy Monday again. ^^
I hope that you will get a perfect score.
I know that you are really studying hard to get great scores.
Keep it up! Do your best tomorrow, okay?
Please always go over the corrections below and always keep in mind the important things.
I am always here to guide you, just ask questions.
Talk to you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
He is the most utter president of the history.
>> Did you mean: The president uttered words that are unforgettable in history. ( Please check the usage of the word, \"utter\" )
Let me try to analysis about that annelid.
>> Let me try the analysis about the Annelid.
I instructed that maritial law.
>> I instructed the Martial Law.
I\'m employed in sAMSUNG.
>> I\'m employed at Samsung.
Imagine what you did.and regret.
>> Imagine what you did and regret it.
If i get a perfect score on this test,I will have a record.
>> If I get a perfect score in the test, I will have a good record.
>> OR: If I will get a perfect score in the test, I will break the record.
My mom told me no one got perfect score three times in a row.
>> My mom told me that no one got a perfect score.
>> OR: My mom told me that nobody got a perfect score for a long time.
If I get a perfect score,It will be exited.
>> If I get a perfect score, it will be exciting.
It will help me of my career.
>> It will be a great help in my future career.
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