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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A glorious Monday to you TOM!
Thank you for doing your homework early. ^^ Hihihihi.
I am proud of you. You got five out of five. ^^ Great!
Oh my god! I am scared of snakes.
I will search about this later and we can talk more about this in class.
How was your weekend? Please tell me about it later.
Teacher Nina
don\'t play
>> correct ^_^
doesn\'t clean
>> correct ^_^
doesn\'t do
>> correct ^_^
don\'t watch
>> correct ^_^
don\'t wake up.
>> correct ^_^
The most dangerous animals in Austraila are Funnel web spider,death adder and eastern brown.
>> correct ^_^
>> OR: The most dangerous animals in Australia are Funnel web spider, Death Adder and Eastern Brown.
Funnel web spider is very dangerous because they live in the house that people live.
>> Funnel web spider is very dangerous because it lives in the house where people live.
>> OR: Funnel web spider is very dangerous because it can be found on our houses.
Death adder is very dangerous because we can\'t see it clearly because of the camouflaging.
>> Death adder is also very dangerous because we can\'t see it clearly because of its camouflage.
>> OR: Death adder is also hazardous because we can\'t see it clearly because of its camouflage.
also this snake has realy dangerous poizon.
>> And this snake has a poison.
>> And the snake has a perilous poison.
Last one is Eastern brown.
>> correct ^_^
This snake is my favorite one.
>> correct ^_^
>> This snake is my favorite.
the people who died because of animals mostly died because of this snake.
>> Most people who died because of animals are because of this snake.
This snake has neurotoxin.
>> correct ^_^
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