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2014-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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don't play doesn't clean doesn't do don't watch don't wake up. The most dangerous animals in Austraila are Funnel web spider,death adder and eastern brown. Funnel web spider is very dangerous because they live in the house that people live. Death adder is very dangerous because we can't see it clearly because of the camouflaging.also this snake has realy dangerous poizon. Last one is Eastern brown. This snake is my favorite one.the people who died because of animals mostly died because of this snake.This snake has neurotoxin.

강사 첨삭

A glorious Monday to you TOM!

Thank you for doing your homework early. ^^ Hihihihi.

I am proud of you. You got five out of five. ^^ Great!

Oh my god! I am scared of snakes.

I will search about this later and we can talk more about this in class.

How was your weekend? Please tell me about it later.

Teacher Nina


don\'t play

>> correct ^_^
doesn\'t clean

>> correct ^_^
doesn\'t do

>> correct ^_^
don\'t watch

>> correct ^_^
don\'t wake up.
>> correct ^_^


The most dangerous animals in Austraila are Funnel web spider,death adder and eastern brown.

>> correct ^_^

>> OR: The most dangerous animals in Australia are Funnel web spider, Death Adder and Eastern Brown.
Funnel web spider is very dangerous because they live in the house that people live.

>> Funnel web spider is very dangerous because it lives in the house where people live.

>> OR: Funnel web spider is very dangerous because it can be found on our houses.
Death adder is very dangerous because we can\'t see it clearly because of the camouflaging.

>> Death adder is also very dangerous because we can\'t see it clearly because of its camouflage.

>> OR: Death adder is also hazardous because we can\'t see it clearly because of its camouflage.

also this snake has realy dangerous poizon.

>> And this snake has a poison.
>> And the snake has a perilous poison.

Last one is Eastern brown.

>> correct ^_^
This snake is my favorite one.

>> correct ^_^

>> This snake is my favorite.

the people who died because of animals mostly died because of this snake.

>> Most people who died because of animals are because of this snake.

This snake has neurotoxin.

>> correct ^_^

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