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2014-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Of course it is Christmas. We can eat a lot of cakes and cookies. People sing the Christmas carol and set the Christmas tree. Children recieve a gift from Santa claus.(?) This is the paradise in KOrea.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon TOM!

Yes, that\'s my favorite part eating. Hihihihi.

I think you at a lot on December 25, am I right?

Me too! Did you receive a lot of gifts?

Tell me about it in class.

I want to thank you for being a great student of mine.

Please go over the corrections provided below.

Talk to you soon. Take care!

Teacher Nina


Of course it is Christmas.

>> correct

>> OR: Of course, it is Christmas.
We can eat a lot of cakes and cookies.

>> correct
People sing the Christmas carol and set the Christmas tree.

>> People sing Christmas carols and fix their Christmas tree.
Children recieve a gift from Santa claus.(?)

>> Children receive gifts from Santa Claus.

>> OR: Every children receives a gift from Santa Claus.
This is the paradise in KOrea.

>> Did you mean: During this season, Korea looks like a paradise.

>> OR: It\'s like a paradise in Korea during this season.

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