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Hello Anchan!^^

I\'ve finally finished making corrections for the second part of your

composition. If you have any questions please just

let me know during our class. :)

Teacher Sarah

humans have lived in group

>> Humans have lived in a group/community.

 since they become much more smarter enough to use tools in catching animals that they need to eat to survive and to get to know how to do agriculture things since brass period.

>> Since then, they became smarter and better in using tools to hunt animals as their food and as a means of survival. They have also known agriculture since the Brass period.
todays
all the people all around the world have been moving their home to much civilized places called according to its size and country, town,village and city.whatever.

>> In modern times, people have been migrating to civilized and bigger places such as towns, villages, and cities.
because not like the ancient people who felt comfortable dwelling in remoteand uncivilized place like im forest, but contemporaries come together to where market has made.

>> This is because unlike ancient people who were comfortable living in remote and uncivilized places like forests, today\'s contemporaries come together to where the market thrives.
the very first coins in human history got shed den the glorious light on its face in lidia which is now assumingly detecting around parkistan in middle east in 2300 bc.

>> The very first coins in human history were discovered in Lidia which is believed to be somewhere in Pakistan in the Middle East around 2300 B.C.

i guess lidian children may have played \'zzola\'.

>> I believe Lidian children might have played \'zzola\'.

:the winner is determined to whom among game participants toss the coins to the nearest to rhe line temporarily drawn or they just name it onto like one straight side of squred floor segment.

>> The winner is determined after the participants toss the coins over a temporarily drawn line or they just name it in one straight side of a squared floor segment.
to some,itwould be some sheer pleasure , but to those who are not familiar with controlling their small sinews deliberately ever between thumb third. 

>> (Please refer to your other composition for my correction on this sentence.)
Though crappy and sulky faced molding coin it was, few people may have grumbled the outgrowth of this tremendous boom of market trade.

>> It might have looked like a crappy old coin before, but it has become an instrument in the growth of a tremendously booming market trade.

using the unilateralled coin thru all the people, lidian people planted the economic historical milestone on the zzola line.
>> With the use of these coins, the Lidian people pioneered an economic milestone along the zzola line.

people carry poop urine with themselves.

>> (Please elaborate more on this.) :)