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Hello Anchan!^^

It\'s always my pleasure to help you out. :)

There are two things I just want to emphasize

regarding your composition:

1. In as much as you can, try using less

complicated words/vocabularies. Remember,

simplicity is key for good communication and

less is more.

2. Try making your sentences less complex

so that you can deliver the exact thought/idea

that you want to get across with.

Always feel free to ask questions or clarifications.

Teacher Sarah

hello considerate and thanksful teacher sarah.

>> Hello, considerate and thankful teacher Sarah,
your correction completes me.joke.)i really appreciate that.

>> Your corrections complete me. I\'m just joking/kidding. I really appreciate it.
i found myself fumbling to click edit button for motifying the previous composition like the way i do want that to my old squeaky idea in my brain.
>> I found myself fumbling to click the edit button to modify my previous composition as a way to express old squeaky ideas in my brain.
may i excuse if u dont mind showing you this tail-cut lizard sentence down here to elongating its end tale by itself

>> DO YOU MEAN: May I excuse if you don\'t mind me sharing about these fragmented sentences?

***Kindly, explain more about this sentence. :)
to some,it would be some sheer pleasure , but to those who are not familiar with controlling their small sinews deliberately ever between thumb and third would be the tough job awaking the third one stiffen toward the lamnent future gambler or something.
>> DO YOU MEAN: To some, it might be sheer pleasure. But to those who cannot control their minds/thoughts/opinions, it is simply taking risks without considering the outcome.
job applicants try to get regular or permanant job.

>> Many job applicants try to get regular or permanent jobs.

and most of their ultimate goal is to live happily after retirement in jobless.

>> One of their ultimate goal is to live happily after retirement without having to work.

the sooner retire the more enjoy.

>> The sooner they retire, the more they will enjoy their benefits.
simply speaking, they want to be jobless after all.

>> Simply speaking, they don\'t want to work after all.

some insight had caught me dragging into my cdcz which is congenitally disordered crazy zone, placed in somewhere drifting in my true consiousness wh

>> Such insight has caught and dragged me into a dilemma that constantly drifts on my consciousness.