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Have you ever witnessed or experienced inexplicable phenomenon? What is déjà vu? Do you occasionally experience it?
i don't have any experience about inexplicable phenomenon but there is a some wondering about the Bermuda triangle, It is also known as the Devil's triangle. At past there are many eccident in that area,missing airplanes, missing shipsa sth. And one man insist that he is survivor of the bermuda triangle. In his phrase, he stayed that area only 3seconds and then when he passed away that eara , he realized that 30years passed by him without doning anything. When i heard that rumor i really wondered that strange phenomenon so i searched about it. On the basis of the search wtich have proved by an australia professor, we can find out a mount of methane gases in that eara. It make the ship lose it's own buoyancy and airplane catch fire on it's engine.
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Have you ever witnessed or experienced inexplicable phenomenon? What is déjà vu? Do you occasionally experience it?i don\'t have any experience about inexplicable phenomenon but there is a some wondering about the Bermuda triangle, It is also known as the Devil\'s triangle.
>>I don\'t have any experience about inexplicable phenomenon but I\'m wondering about the Bermuda triangle which is also known as \"The Devil\'s Triangle\".
At past there are many eccident in that area,missing airplanes, missing shipsa sth.
>>In the past there were many accidents in that area which includes missing airplanes and ships.
And one man insist that he is survivor of the bermuda triangle.
>>A man insisted that he was a survivor of the Bermuda Triangle.
In his phrase, he stayed that area only 3seconds and then when he passed away that eara , he realized that 30years passed by him without doning anything.
>> In his statement, he said that he stayed in that area for only 3 seconds and then when he passed that era , he realized that 30 years passed by without him doing anything.
When i heard that rumor i really wondered that strange phenomenon so i searched about it.
>>When I heard that rumor I really wondered about that strange phenomenon so I searched about it.
On the basis of the search wtich have proved by an australia professor, we can find out a mount of methane gases in that eara.
>>Based on the research conducted by an Austrlian professor, we can find amount of methane gases in that area.
It make the ship lose it\'s own buoyancy and airplane catch fire on it\'s engine.
>> It made the ship lost its own bouyancy and airplane catch fires on its engine.
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