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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day TOM!
Thank you for sharing that poem today.
It is really nice.
You did a great job with your sentences.
I hope that you will find more words to study.
Have a nice weekend.
Teacher Nina
Don\'t go to the alley!!
>> Correct
he fainted retirely one hour ago.
>> He entirely fainted one hour ago.
>> He was unconscious one hour ago.
he roamed for a long time and finally he felt that the house is very comfortable.
>> He roamed around the house for a long time and finally he felt that he is comfortable there.
Let me upgrade that computer!!
>> Correct
He was very slim that i can\'t see him.
>> Correct
>> He was very slim that I can\'t even see him afar.
There is poem like this.
>> Correct
\'Super worm is super strong!
>> Correct
Super worm is super long.
>> Correct
Super worm is super big!
>> Correct
Super worm is super thick!!\'
>> Correct
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