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2015-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Don't go to the alley!! he fainted retirely one hour ago. he roamed for a long time and finally he felt that the house is very comfortable. Let me upgrade that computer!! He was very slim that i can't see him. There is poem like this. 'Super worm is super strong! Super worm is super long. Super worm is super big! Super worm is super thick!!'

강사 첨삭

Good day TOM!

Thank you for sharing that poem today.

It is really nice.

You did a great job with your sentences.

I hope that you will find more words to study.

Have a nice weekend.

Teacher Nina


Don\'t go to the alley!!

>> Correct
he fainted retirely one hour ago.

>> He entirely fainted one hour ago.

>> He was unconscious one hour ago.
he roamed for a long time and finally he felt that the house is very comfortable.

>> He roamed around the house for a long time and finally he felt that he is comfortable there. 
Let me upgrade that computer!!

>> Correct
He was very slim that i can\'t see him.

>> Correct

>> He was very slim that I can\'t even see him afar.


There is poem like this.

>> Correct
\'Super worm is super strong!

>> Correct
Super worm is super long.

>> Correct
Super worm is super big!
>> Correct

Super worm is super thick!!\'

>> Correct

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