HW 6.1
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes I feel sad, and sometimes I feel happy, because meeting with someone is such a hassle sometimes. It would be upsetting if I got a cancel message after I had already left my home, but if I were at home, it would be okay. I think it is the I\'s property of MBTI. I guess many \'I\' people relate to that.
But if the trip was canceled, I would feel bad. Going on a trip makes me excited, so I usually prepare a lot of things like checking famous spots, restaurants, transportation options, and so on. It would be really sad if I couldn\'t do anything that I prepared.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
Canceled plans may happen to anyone. This sentence is somewhat false, so I want to revise it by saying that successful people never cancel plans and when some appointments are canceled, they are being redirected since they are busy people having a long list of things to do on their daily plans.
Always remember, when your time is lenient and free for one thing, you can do so many things with that vacant time. It is true that sometimes, canceled appointments are even a respite for busy and successful people because they can get to rest. Therefore, stay productive and make good use of that canceled and vacant time because it can never come back. Time lost is life lost on your clock.
Please review the underscored parts of your composition and develop your grammar from them well. Good job!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> Sometimes I feel sad, and sometimes I feel happy because meeting with someone is such a hassle sometimes. It would be upset if I got a cancel message after I had already left my home, but if I were at home, it would be okay. I think it is the I\'s property of MBTI. I guess many \'I\' people relate to that.
But if the trip was canceled, I would feel bad. Going on a trip makes me excited, so I usually prepare a lot of things like checking famous spots, restaurants, transportation options, and so on. It would be really sad if I couldn\'t do anything that I prepared.
But if the trip was canceled, I would feel bad. Going on a trip makes me excited, so I usually prepare a lot of things like checking famous spots, restaurants, transportation options, and so on. It would be really sad if I couldn\'t do anything that I prepared.
>>> But if the trip was canceled, I would feel bad. Going on a trip makes me excited, so I usually prepare a lot of things like checking famous spots, restaurants, transportation options, and so on. It would be really sad if I couldn\'t do anything that I prepared for. Very good sentences!
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