HW 6.14
학생이 쓴 원문
I tried every Hongkong food like fries, soups, drink, noodles, and so on. Unfortunately, all of them didn\'t suit for me. I was so excited to experience the real Chinese food, but I couldn\'t enjoy anything, because it was too salty for me.
I heard that it\'s not all the same Chinese food. China, Macao, Hongkong, Taiwan, all of them have their own unique styles.
I didn\'t know before.
Because I can\'t read and speak Cantonese, so I couldn\'t choose food fitted in Korean. So, I want to try to find delicious local food for me when I visit there next time.
By the way, lemon coke was the best I\'ve ever tasted.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
There is a distinct Chinese scent or flavor that may not be suitable in your palate. I realized that too when I ate in a buffet in Macao. That is the authentic Chinese flavor. When you taste Chinese food in other countries, it may be different.
Nevertheless, trying food for many times may change your perception. Some people who tried [이름]chi for the first time may say that it may have a strong taste and love it afterwards.
Notice the underlined words below, they contain grammar suggestions. Great job!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
I heard that it\'s not all the same Chinese food. China, Macao, Hongkong, Taiwan, all of them have their own unique styles.
I didn\'t know before.
>>> I tried every Hongkong food like fries, soups, drink, noodles, and so on. Unfortunately, all of them didn\'t suit me. I was so excited to experience the real Chinese food, but I couldn\'t enjoy anything, because it was too salty for me.
I heard that it\'s not all the same for Chinese food. China, Macao, Hongkong, Taiwan, all of them have their own unique styles.
I didn\'t know it before.
Because I can\'t read and speak Cantonese, so I couldn\'t choose food fitted in Korean. So, I want to try to find delicious local food for me when I visit there next time.
By the way, lemon coke was the best I\'ve ever tasted.
I heard that it\'s not all the same for Chinese food. China, Macao, Hongkong, Taiwan, all of them have their own unique styles.
I didn\'t know it before.
Because I can\'t read and speak Cantonese, so I couldn\'t choose food fitted in Korean. So, I want to try to find delicious local food for me when I visit there next time.
By the way, lemon coke was the best I\'ve ever tasted.
>>> Because I can\'t read and speak Cantonese, I couldn\'t choose food fit in Korea. So, I want to try to find delicious local food for me when I visit there next time.
By the way, lemon coke was the best I\'ve ever tasted.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.