HW 6.19
학생이 쓴 원문
I fully reseted last weekend. I went to my parent’s house, and I played some computer games. It’s been a while since I last played games.
I watched a movie, “There Will Be Blood”, it was awesome. The acting was amazing. And the last scene that the lead actor killed the villain was the best scene in the movie, and it felt so satisfying.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]!
Congratulations for resting fully! You deserve that after a long arduous semester. Two more semesters to go. Hang in there!
There are many sites on the Internet that you can access for movies. Enjoy the one I sent you. Be patient in clicking though. ^^
The movie, There Will be Blood seems to be an interesting film. I will read the synopsis on the Internet.
Thank you for your homework submission. Your sentences are very clear and easy to read. Keep up the great work!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> I fully rested last weekend. I went to my parent’s house, and I played some computer games. It’s been a while since I last played games. Very good sentences!
I watched a movie, “There Will Be Blood”, it was awesome. The acting was amazing. And the last scene that the lead actor killed the villain was the best scene in the movie, and it felt so satisfying.
>>> I watched the movie, “There Will Be Blood”, it was awesome. The acting was amazing. The last scene where the lead actor killed the villain was the best scene in the movie, and it felt so satisfying.
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