HW 6.3
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually I don\'t care of the comments about my face, because it\'s not important to be seen good for guys. Whatever they do compliment or not about my face, I just laugh and say \"thank you\".
But if I heard negative comments from girls, I would feel depressed. I\'ve sometimes heard that your eyes are too big, and you look kind of oily, and my face and voice are not matched. I think my voice is kind of high tone. So, I\'m planning to go a voice academic to make my voice sound better in summer vacation.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
We all have our own biases regarding good looks and facial beauty. Your big eyes may be seen too much in your country but it is the normal size in the Philippines.
While others may comment on how we look like, we have to love our features and be confident about them. Genes do not lie. When we want to enhance our beauty your country is the best place to visit in terms of plastic surgery.
You did a wonderful job in answering the question fully and using the correct vocabulary words to describe your experiences.
Thank you! See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> Actually I don\'t care about comments on my face because it\'s not important to be seen good/well by guys. Whatever they do and compliment or not about my face, I just laugh and say \"Thank you\". Very good sentences!
But if I heard negative comments from girls, I would feel depressed. I\'ve sometimes heard that your eyes are too big, and you look kind of oily, and my face and voice are not matched. I think my voice is kind of high tone. So, I\'m planning to go a voice academic to make my voice sound better in summer vacation.
But if I heard negative comments from girls, I would feel depressed. I\'ve sometimes heard that your eyes are too big, and you look kind of oily, and my face and voice are not matched. I think my voice is kind of high tone. So, I\'m planning to go a voice academic to make my voice sound better in summer vacation.
>>> But if I heard negative comments from girls, I would feel depressed. I\'ve sometimes heard that my eyes are too big, I look kind of oily, and my face and voice do not matched. I think my voice is kind of high tone. So, I\'m planning to go to a voice academy to make my voice sound better in summer vacation.
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