HW 6.5
학생이 쓴 원문
I love to shop clothes, accessories, and shoes. I often go to department stores to shop. Until last year, I used to go vintage stores, and I enjoyed But recently, I felt annoying to find and pick the good stuff among a lot of vintages. So, I just start to buy these on the Internet.
When I\'m shopping in stores, I don\'t want the staff to talk to me. I just want to look around. If I have a question, I will talk to them. So, I love stores where the staff are quiet.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
As a college student, this is the time for your discovery and identity in terms of fashion. Explore and mix and match styles to get the best out of your clothing line. You have a great taste in shades and texture.
Congratulations for getting the second part of your composition all correctly! Your thoughts have depth and your style in writing is remarkable. Keep it up.
See you next week.
-T. Donna~
>>> I love to shop clothes, accessories, and shoes. I often go to department stores to shop. Until last year, I used to go to vintage stores, and I enjoyed but recently, I felt annoyed to find and pick the good stuff among a lot of vintages. So, I just started to buy these on the Internet.
When I\'m shopping in stores, I don\'t want the staff to talk to me. I just want to look around. If I have a question, I will talk to them. So, I love stores where the staff are quiet.
When I\'m shopping in stores, I don\'t want the staff to talk to me. I just want to look around. If I have a question, I will talk to them. So, I love stores where the staff are quiet.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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