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학생이 쓴 원문
< What’s one thing you could never live without and why? >
You said only one things, but two things occur to me.
First is Jesus.
He is most important person in my life, and I believe that he is the son of God.
Not only He gave me new life, but also he gave me all good things.
He gave me good husband, good job and health.
And he sent me good person who can help me.
He brought new hope to me.
I believe that all things that I have are given by Him.
In the future, He will care and lead my life.
So I will never live without Him.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
OH YOU HAVE TOUCHED MY HEART [이름]. You know, Jesus is also the most important person for me in my life.
I remember defending Jesus that he is the son of God from a person which is a muslin.
I have cried many times for Jesus but I will never stop doing the same just to defend what I believe. :)
< What’s one thing you could never live without and why? >
You said only one things, but two things occur to me.
>> You said only one thing, but two things occur to me.
First is Jesus.
>> CORRECT
He is most important person in my life, and I believe that he is the son of God.
>> He is the most important person in my life, and I believe that he is the son of God.
Not only He gave me new life, but also he gave me all good things.
>> Not only that he gave me new hope but also, he gave me all good things in life.
He gave me good husband, good job and health.
>> He gave me a good husband, good job and health.
And he sent me good person who can help me.
>> CORRECT
He brought new hope to me.
>> CORRECT
I believe that all things that I have are given by Him.
>> CORRECT
In the future, He will care and lead my life.
>> In the future, He will take care and lead my life.
So I will never live without Him.
>> CORRECT
OH YOU HAVE TOUCHED MY HEART [이름]. You know, Jesus is also the most important person for me in my life.
I remember defending Jesus that he is the son of God from a person which is a muslin.
I have cried many times for Jesus but I will never stop doing the same just to defend what I believe. :)
< What’s one thing you could never live without and why? >
You said only one things, but two things occur to me.
>> You said only one thing, but two things occur to me.
First is Jesus.
>> CORRECT
He is most important person in my life, and I believe that he is the son of God.
>> He is the most important person in my life, and I believe that he is the son of God.
Not only He gave me new life, but also he gave me all good things.
>> Not only that he gave me new hope but also, he gave me all good things in life.
He gave me good husband, good job and health.
>> He gave me a good husband, good job and health.
And he sent me good person who can help me.
>> CORRECT
He brought new hope to me.
>> CORRECT
I believe that all things that I have are given by Him.
>> CORRECT
In the future, He will care and lead my life.
>> In the future, He will take care and lead my life.
So I will never live without Him.
>> CORRECT
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