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Hello,teacher! I am [이름]. Today I will write about my biggest goal in my life. The biggest goal in my life is very simple. Just I want to be happy. Before I thought that happiness is to have much money and good job. To have much money and good job is happiness, too. But I think that real happiness is to live doing my favorite job. If I enter a big company that I didn't want to work. But If I enter a company that I like. So my biggest goal is to live working my favorite road.

Hi, [이름]!   You really have a very simple goal in life. And I think that is the most important thing in life. To live your life happy. And enjoy everything that is around you. So always stay happy!   _Teacher Dianne ^^   Hello,teacher! >> CORRECT I am [이름]. >> CORRECT Today I will write about my biggest goal in my life. >> CORRECT The biggest goal in my life is very simple. >> CORRECT Just I want to be happy. >> I just want to be happy. Before I thought that happiness is to have much money and good job. >> Before, I thought that happiness is to have much money and a good job. To have much money and good job is happiness, too. >> To have much money and a good job are my happiness, too.But I think that real happiness is to live doing my favorite job. >> CORRECTIf I enter a big company that I didn\'t want to work. >> If I enter a big company that I didn\'t want to work with, then I will feel unhappy.But If I enter a company that I like. >> But If I enter a company that I like, I will be happy. So my biggest goal is to live working my favorite road. >> So my biggest goal, is to live working my favorite kind of job.