HW 7.16
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know well about men\'s luxury clothing brands, so I searched for some brands, buy they were not my style. Then I searched for luxury watch brands, and Rolex was the most familiar to me. Someday, I\'ll buy a Rolex.
I don\'t think that Ralph Lauren is a luxury brand, but it\'s still expensive for me, so I usually buy second hand clothes. It\'s my favorite.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Congratulations for getting all of your sentences organized and correctly put together! It doesn\'t matter that it is short. It matters that they are correct.
Someday, you will own many Rolex and other luxurious clothes and accessories as you wish if you are smart enough to grow your wealth. So, do what you love and love what you do. Earn money limitlessly!
Excellent job!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
I don\'t think that Ralph Lauren is a luxury brand, but it\'s still expensive for me, so I usually buy second hand clothes. It\'s my favorite.
I don\'t think that Ralph Lauren is a luxury brand, but it\'s still expensive for me, so I usually buy second hand clothes. It\'s my favorite.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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