HW 7.20
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think there is one collect answer about this question, but I\'d like to say it\'s about different values. I think the best time getting married is when I\'m ready to buy a house and a car. I can\'t expect financial support from my parents when I get married, so I need to prepare for at least one of them myself.
I want to get married only when I’m financially stable.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
This may be a similar idea to many young people around the world today most especially in your country where the number of people getting married is shy compared to some decades ago.
Stability is the keyword that single people want to establish before diving into more responsibilities.
Take note that the way you pronounce words affects your spelling. Thus \"r\" and \"l\" need to be distinct always.
Well done!
See you later.
-T. Donna~
I want to get married only when I’m financially stable.
>> I don\'t think there is one correct answer about this question, but I\'d like to say it\'s about different values. I think the best time getting married is when I\'m ready to buy a house and a car. I can\'t expect financial support from my parents when I get married, so I need to prepare for at least one of them myself.
I want to get married only when I’m financially stable.
I want to get married only when I’m financially stable.
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