HW 7.22
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m interested in American sports leagues like the MLB and the NBA. I started watching MLB because of Ohtani. I liked the story that underdog teams beat strong teams, but Ohtani moved from the Angles to the Dodgers. So, I ended up to lose my interest in MLB. Now, I\'m not watching more before, but I still watch highlight clips on Youtube sometimes.
I also like NBA, because their play is so awesome. I think NBA is more interesting during the offseason because of the trade rumors.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
I did not know that you were into sports. Through this homework answer, I learned about it. Truly, underdogs can rise from the dust and conquer the kings. Too bad, Ohtani got injured and he missed some action from the previous league.
In the NBA, let us hope that your teams will make it to the top teams for next year\'s league.
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See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>> I\'m interested in American sports leagues like the MLB and the NBA. I started watching MLB because of Ohtani. I like the story that underdog teams beat strong teams, but Ohtani moved from the Angles to the Dodgers. So, I ended up losing my interest in MLB. Now, I\'m not watching more than before, but I still watch highlight clips on YouTube sometimes.
I also like NBA, because their play is so awesome. I think NBA is more interesting during the offseason because of the trade rumors.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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