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2018-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gracelyn

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Thanks for your support as always. 1. Peter is playing tennis on Sunday. 2. My brother's birthday is on the 5th of November. 3. My birthday is in May. 4. We are going to see my parents on Monday. 5. in 1666, a great fire broke out in London. 6. I don't like walking alone in the streets at night. 7. What are you doing in the afternoon? 8. My friend has been living in Canada for two years. 9. I have been waiting for you at seven o'clock. 10. I will have finished this essay by Friday. -if you can be awake for one week without sleeping, what will you do? I will exercise every time I break. there is not enough time to do exercise during the week. when i got home, i eat dinner and then sleep always. I have got a lot of weight since i met my boyfriend. so, if it actually happen,i want to work out whole days to lose my weight. - how would you make a long day short? when i spent time with my family, i feel like time is flying. I do spend time with people I like.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ji! Great Tuesday to you! Thank you very much for sending in your homework. I\'ll talk to you in class.

Thanks for your support as always.
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1. Peter is playing tennis on Sunday.
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2. My brother\'s birthday is on the 5th of November.
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3. My birthday is in May.
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4. We are going to see my parents on Monday.
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5. in 1666, a great fire broke out in London.
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6. I don\'t like walking alone in the streets at night.
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7. What are you doing in the afternoon?
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8. My friend has been living in Canada for two years.
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9. I have been waiting for you at seven o\'clock.
>>I have been waiting for you sine seven o\'clock.
10. I will have finished this essay by Friday. 
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-if you can be awake for one week without sleeping, what will you do?
I will exercise every time I break. 
>>I will exercise every time I am on break.
>>I will exercise during  my free time.
there is not enough time to do exercise during the week. 
>>There is not enough time to exercise during weekdays.
when i got home, i eat dinner and then sleep always.
>>When I get home, I always eat dinner and then sleep.
 I have got a lot of weight since i met my boyfriend. 
>>I gained weight since I met my boyfriend.
so, if it actually happen,i want to work out whole days to lose my weight. 
>>So if it actually happens, I want to work out for the whole day to lose weight.
- how would you make a long day short?
when i spent time with my family, i feel like time is flying. 
>>I can feel that time flies when I spend time with my family.
I do spend time with people I like.
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