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Hi JIN,
Thank You for doing your assignment
It\'s a gift to know how to lead and how to support other people
Good Job!
Teacher Brian,
If you ask me which character am I between leader & supporter, I would say I am a both side type.
>>If you ask me on what character do I acquire between a leader & a supporter, I would say that I am in between
I usually do the both leading and supporting my team
>>because I usually do both leading and supporting my team.
when I was student in my team project.
>>when I was a student we have this team project,
I collected our team\'s opinions and presented our presentation to support and lead our project.
>>what I did was I collected our team\'s opinions and collate them as I presented our project to support and lead our project.
however when I work in company,
>>however when I am working in a company,
I need someone who lead the project,
>>I need someone who will lead the project for me
because I don\'t have a enough knowledge about that.
>>because I don\'t have a enough knowledge about it
so I followed up PM\'s leading and I supported what we were planing to.
>>so I follow out PM\'s lead and supported what we were planing to do.
[sense of value on my work]
[sense of value on my work]
I like the word that jobs mentioned \"Stay hungry. Stay foolish\"
>>I like the saying \"Stay hungry Stay foolish\"
this word make me awake. fast and too much optional these days,
>>this quotation makes me awake these days,
awaking is the most important thing.
>>awaking is the most important thing.
Especially, I had a difficulty to enhance myself to next step these days.
>>Especially that I have a difficulty on motivating myself to take next step and go further these days
because I am in the period of preparing seeking the job.
>>because I am in that moment where in I am looking for a job.
so I remind this word myself and try to awake
>>so I keep this quotation in mind to remind myself of my goals and to try to stay awake.
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