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2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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[type] If you ask me which character am I between leader & supporter, I would say I am a both side type. I usually do the both leading and supporting my team when I was student in my team project. I collected our team's opinions and presented our presentation to support and lead our project. however when I work in company, I need someone who lead the project, because I don't have a enough knowledge about that. so I followed up PM's leading and I supported what we were planing to. [sense of value on my work] I like the word that jobs mentioned "Stay hungry. Stay foolish" this word make me awake. fast and too much optional these days, awaking is the most important thing. Especially, I had a difficulty to enhance myself to next step these days. because I am in the period of preparing seeking the job. so I remind this word myself and try to awake

강사 첨삭

Hi JIN,
Thank You for doing your assignment

It\'s a gift to know how to lead and how to support other people
Good Job!



Teacher Brian,



If you ask me which character am I between leader & supporter, I would say I am a both side type.

>>If you ask me on what character do I acquire between a leader & a supporter, I would say that I am in between
I usually do the both leading and supporting my team

>>because I usually do both leading and supporting my team.

when I was student in my team project.

>>when I was a student we have this team project,

I collected our team\'s opinions and presented our presentation to support and lead our project. 

>>what I did was I collected our team\'s opinions and collate them as I presented our project to support and lead our project. 
however when I work in company,

>>however when I am working in a company,

I need someone who lead the project,

>>I need someone who will lead the project for me

because I don\'t have a enough knowledge about that.

>>because I don\'t have a enough knowledge about it

so I followed up PM\'s leading and I supported what we were planing to.
>>so I follow out PM\'s lead and supported what we were planing to do.
[sense of value on my work]

[sense of value on my work]
I like the word that jobs mentioned \"Stay hungry. Stay foolish\"

>>I like the saying \"Stay hungry Stay foolish\"
this word make me awake. fast and too much optional these days,

>>this quotation makes me awake these days,

awaking is the most important thing.

>>awaking is the most important thing. 

Especially, I had a difficulty to enhance myself to next step these days.

>>Especially that I have a difficulty on motivating myself to take next step and go further these days

because I am in the period of preparing seeking the job.

>>because I am in that moment where in I am looking for a job.

so I remind this word myself and try to awake

>>so I keep this quotation in mind to remind myself of my goals and to try to stay awake.

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