HW
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Jin,
Thank you for doing your Homework. ^^
Keep up the good Job
Teacher Brian
[what did I do in my team when I work]
[what did I do in my team when I work]
When I work in consulting company,
>>When I was working in a consulting company,
I usually research abroad energy market and issues to support my team.
>>I usually spend time researching about the energy market issues abroad to further support my team
Especially, as I was working in the climate change department,
>>Especially when I was working in the climate change department,
I prepared ppt to present our proposal to our customer.
>>I prepared PowerPoint Presentation to present our proposal to our customer,
I handled mass data in energy market’s data and manipulated to find a better solution for our customer.
>>I handled massive data\'s in energy market’s and tried my best to find a better solution for our customers needs,
Until the time to find solutions takes large effort,
>>The time to find solutions to each problem takes large effort,
our team always found solutions by hook or by crook
>>but by hook or by crook our team always find the solutions.
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