HW

Hi Jin,
Thank you for doing your assignment
Happy Monday
and See you in my class.

Keep up the good work.

Teacher Brian

[what factors do you think will maintain your interest in this company]

[what factors do you think will maintain your interest in this company]
I think the factor that I stay long in your company is your company vision.

>>I think that staying in your company for long term is my main interest as of the moment.
I was fully attracted in your company vision which is heading to a top company in this field.

>>I am really eager to be a part of your company as I am in your companies vision which is aiming to be a top company in this kind of field.

That vision makes me apply your company and will make me dedicate longer in your company. 

>>That vision makes me want to apply in your company and to have a long term career.
because, I also had a similar value in what I do.

>>Because I always try my best to be the best in what I do.

Even my skill is not enough to take the top position,

>> Even if my skills are not yet enough to be on a higher position

I always try harder to growing up myself.

>> I always strive harder for my self growth.

I remind myself with the steven job\'s saying \'stay hungry, stay foolish\', and then I push myself much harder. 

>> I always keep in mind what Steve job\'s said that \"Stay Hungry, Stay Foolish\" as I push my self to my limits
 with these reasons, I believe that your company will grow me up as a talented expert that I want to be as long as I constantly work in your company.

>> With these reasons, I believe that your company can turn me into an asset that is talented and expert on what I do as I work in your company.