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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
having job while they are students is great.
>> Having a job while they are students is great.
because they can learn about how to earn money and use money affordable, value of labor.
>> It is because they can learn about how to earn money and spend it wisely. It is the value of labor.
they also appreciate their parents.
>> They will also learn how to appreciate their parents.
so l agree with this opinion.
>> So I would agree to this opinion.
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