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ESSAY: Some people trust their first impressions about a person\'s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person\'s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with?
l gree with both attitudes.
>> Correct
because, when l\'m making friends, I don\'t believe first impression.
>> Because when I\'m making friends, I don\'t believe in first impression.
most of my best friends don\'t have good impression.
>> Most of my best friends didn\'t have good impressions
The other way, when I\'m looking for a date, I believe first impression.
>> On the other hand, when I\'m looking for a date, I believe in the first impression.
or
>>> On the contrary, when I\'m looking for a date, I believe in the first impression.
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