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If you will have to choose to become someone other than yourself, who
would it be and why?
I want to be Emma Watson.
she is pretty and smart. also she is young and rich.
she has all i want for life.
강사 첨삭
If you will have to choose to become someone other than yourself, who
would it be and why?
I want to be Emma Watson.
>> Correct
she is pretty and smart. also she is young and rich.
>> She is pretty, smart and she is young and rich.
she has all i want for life.
>>She has everything I want in life.
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