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2018-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I'll try again tomorrow."!! Thanks for giving me your good energy as always. 1. Uluru is located in central Australia. 2. The large sandstone rock formation is also known as Ayers Rock honor Sir Henry Ayers, who was a Premier in South Australia in 1873. 3. Uluru is listed on a World Heritage Area for both its natural and cultural values. 4. It is sacred for the Aboriginal people in the area. 5. at different times during the day, Uluru seems to change color. 6. The sandstone is infused into minerals that reflect the red light on sunrise and sunset

강사 첨삭

Hi there JI[이름]!!

Thanks for doing this!

I am looking forward to having another fun talk with you later.

See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

I\'ll try again tomorrow.\"!!
Thanks for giving me your good energy as always.

1. Uluru is located in central Australia.
>>> Correct!
2. The large sandstone rock formation is also known as Ayers Rock honor Sir Henry Ayers, who was a Premier in South Australia in 1873.
>>> Correct!
3. Uluru is listed on a World Heritage Area for both its natural and cultural values.
>>> Uluru is listed as a World Heritage Area for both its natural and cultural values.
4. It is sacred for the Aboriginal people in the area.
>>> Correct! [It is sacred to the Aboriginal people of the area.]
5. at different times during the day, Uluru seems to change color.
>>> . At different times of the day, Uluru seems to change color.
6. The sandstone is infused into minerals that reflect the red light on sunrise and sunset.

>>> The sandstone is infused with minerals that reflect the red light of sunrise and sunset.

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