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학생이 쓴 원문
How do you imagine the world without music and art? Explain your answer in no less than 5 sentences.
no way! I can\'t imagine the world without music. I\'m so gloomy. because the music always encourage me to look at the bright side. when I listen to the music, I feel better than before. so, I can\'t live without the music.
강사 첨삭
How do you imagine the world without music and art? Explain your answer in no less than 5 sentences.
no way! I can\'t imagine the world without music.
>> No way! I can\'t imagine the world without music.
I\'m so gloomy. because the music always encourage me to look at the bright side.
>> I will feel gloomy because music always encourage me to look at the bright side.
when I listen to the music, I feel better than before. so, I can\'t live without the music.
>> When I listen to music, I feel better than before. So, I can\'t live without music.
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