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2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I heard a little polite laughter when I told my jokes but every one laughed loudly when Gaby was telling hers. Her jokes are always much funnier than mine. 2. The negative effects of watching too much television are the safest than they appear to be at first glance. 3. The Japanese islands have a climate modified and moderated by the sea; winters are less cold than in those areas that are in the same latitude on the Asian continent. 4. Only by multilateral action, can we give people in the least developed countries the chance to escape the ugly misery of poverty, ignorance and disease. 5. That movie we saw last night was much more interesting than the one on television. 6. a lot more complicated known dam, an engineering wonder of the ancient world, lies near Marib, once the home of the Queen of Sheba. 7. I broke my nose in a football game yesterday. Today it's very painful. For same reason, the pain is much worse today than it was yesterday.

강사 첨삭

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~Teacher Shanee^^,


1. I heard a little polite laughter when I told my jokes but every one laughed loudly when Gaby was telling hers. Her jokes are always much funnier than mine.
>>> Correct!
2. The negative effects of watching too much television are the safest than they appear to be at first glance.
>>> a lot more complicated
3. The Japanese islands have a climate modified and moderated by the sea; winters are less cold than in those areas that are in the same latitude on the Asian continent.
>>> Correct!
4. Only by multilateral action, can we give people in the least developed countries the chance to escape the ugly misery of poverty, ignorance and disease.
>>> Correct!
5. That movie we saw last night was much more interesting than the one on television.
>>> Correct!
6. a lot more complicated known dam, an engineering wonder of the ancient world, lies near Marib, once the home of the Queen of Sheba.
>>> The oldest known dam
7. I broke my nose in a football game yesterday. Today it\'s very painful. For same reason, the pain is much worse today than it was yesterday.

>>> Correct!

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