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2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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7. I broke my nose in a football game yesterday. Today it's very painful. For same reason, the pain is much worse today than it was yesterday. 8. many more people die in car accidents than in plane accidents. Statistics show that driving your own car is more dangerous than flying in an airplane. 9. Marcel Duchamp is considered as one of the most influential artists of the 20th century by the modern art world. 10. From my point of view, of the two applicants, the latter one is the more suitable for the post. 11. It is the most expensive to live in London than any other city in Britain. Rents are much higher and it is difficult to find accommodation of any kind. 12. Titanic was said to be far more expensive ocean liner in the world. When it set sail, all the cabins were full, from the oldest to the cheapest ones on the lower deck.

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Here is the continuation JI[이름]!

Thanks a lot!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

   

7. I broke my nose in a football game yesterday. Today it\'s very painful. For same reason, the pain is much worse today than it was yesterday.
>>> Correct!
8. many more people die in car accidents than in plane accidents. Statistics show that driving your own car is more dangerous than flying in an airplane.
>>> Correct!
9. Marcel Duchamp is considered as one of the most influential artists of the 20th century by the modern art world.
>>> Correct!
10. From my point of view, of the two applicants, the latter one is the more suitable for the post.
>>> Correct!
11. It is the most expensive to live in London than any other city in Britain. Rents are much higher and it is difficult to find accommodation of any kind.
>>> far more expensive
12. Titanic was said to be far more expensive ocean liner in the world. When it set sail, all the cabins were full, from the oldest to the cheapest ones on the lower deck.

>>> the safest

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