HW

2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Years ago, Kelin was my student. I taught Western Civilization to her during her freshman year. Since I was an 2)internationalteaching 3) assistant I was aware that I spoke with an accent. I was also aware that my students might have ideas that were very different from mine. Kelin often snickered when I said something she 4) Both B and C are correct . She often asked questions that put me on the spot. 5) Both B and C are correct I was sometimes hurt by her comments, I was always polite to Kelin. Several days ago, I saw Kelin downtown. She approached me and 6) said “I learned so much in your class. You were my favorite teacher at the 7) university". I was touched and amazed.

강사 첨삭

Keep it up [이름]!
See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,

1) Years ago, Kelin was my student. I taught Western Civilization to her during her freshman
year.
>>> Correct!
Since I was an 2)international teaching
>>> Correct!
3) assistant I was aware that I spoke with an accent. I was also aware that my students might have ideas that were very different from mine.
>>> assistant, I
Kelin often snickered when I said something she 4) Both B and C are correct . She often asked questions that put me on the spot.
>>> Correct!
5) Both B and C are correct I was sometimes hurt by her comments, I was always polite to Kelin.
>>> Correct!
Several days ago, I saw Kelin downtown. She approached me and 6) said “I learned so much in your class.
>>> Correct!
You were my favorite teacher at the 7) university\". I was touched and amazed.
>>> 7. university.\" I

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