HW
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Essay : Describe an ideal marriage partner.
The marriage partner what I ideal would be have three conditions.
First condition is a 'kind'.
He/She should be able to listen why you angry.
And He is able to apologize and do not the behavior.
You may not know how you do when you deal with partner.
But if you don't modify what your partner having a complaint, you can't keep going your relationship.
Second is a 'ability'.
Most of reason to couple fight is a Money.
But I'm not tell you must meet million dollars.
I mean you have to meet someone who is a sincery and who be able to eat out once a week.
Last is a 'physical'
if you plan to have a baby, you need to emphasize this condition.
it is just kidding.
Nice body means he/she is a healthy and can self- management.
Most importantly, the partner must love you.
강사 첨삭
Thank you very much, Yu Lim^^
I strongly agree that your partner must really love you~
See you!
Essay : Describe an ideal marriage partner.
>>CORRECT!
The marriage partner what I ideal would be have three conditions.
>>The marriage partner that I find ideal would have three conditions.
First condition is a \'kind\'.
>>CORRECT!
The marriage partner what I ideal would be have three conditions.
>>The marriage partner that I find ideal would have three conditions.
First condition is a \'kind\'.
>>First condition is \'kind\'.
He/She should be able to listen why you angry.
He/She should be able to listen why you angry.
>>He/she should be able to listen why you are angry.
And He is able to apologize and do not the behavior.
And He is able to apologize and do not the behavior.
>>And he is able to apologize for his wrongdoing and do not do a certain behavior.
You may not know how you do when you deal with partner.
You may not know how you do when you deal with partner.
>>You may not know what you should do when you deal with a partner.
But if you don\'t modify what your partner having a complaint, you can\'t keep going your relationship.
>>But if you don\'t change what your partner is having a complaint about, you can\'t continue your relationship.
Second is a \'ability\'.
But if you don\'t modify what your partner having a complaint, you can\'t keep going your relationship.
>>But if you don\'t change what your partner is having a complaint about, you can\'t continue your relationship.
Second is a \'ability\'.
>>Second is \'ability\'.
Most of reason to couple fight is a Money.
Most of reason to couple fight is a Money.
>>The reason why couples fight most is money.
But I\'m not tell you must meet million dollars.
But I\'m not tell you must meet million dollars.
>>But I am not telling you that you must meet a man who makes a million dollars.
I mean you have to meet someone who is a sincery and who be able to eat out once a week.
>>I mean you have to meet someone who is sincere and who is able to eat out once a week.
Last is a \'physical\'
I mean you have to meet someone who is a sincery and who be able to eat out once a week.
>>I mean you have to meet someone who is sincere and who is able to eat out once a week.
Last is a \'physical\'
>>The last is the physical aspect.
if you plan to have a baby, you need to emphasize this condition.
if you plan to have a baby, you need to emphasize this condition.
>>If you plan to have a baby, you need to emphasize this condition.
it is just kidding.
it is just kidding.
>>It is just kidding.
Nice body means he/she is a healthy and can self- management.
>>Nice body means he/she is healthy and can do self- management.
Most importantly, the partner must love you.
Nice body means he/she is a healthy and can self- management.
>>Nice body means he/she is healthy and can do self- management.
Most importantly, the partner must love you.
>>CORRECT!
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