HW

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for writing this beautiful essay.
I loved reading about it not only because this place is found in my country but because I know for a fact that this place is indeed a paradise.

You\'ve created a lot of good sentences and you\'ve included a lot of good vocabularies.
Keep it up!

I hope Boracay would be rehabilitated soon. I can\'t wait to go back! ^^

See you in class later.

~Teacher Charry

Hi~^^ 

>> Hi! ^^ 
This is my answer.
>>CORRECT

OR >> Here is my answer.
 If I can have a vacation, I would like to go to Boracay in the Philippines.

>>If I could have a vacation, I would like to go to Boracay in the Philippines.

Also, I want to do diving in the ocean. And, I like to do snorkeling.

>>Also, I want to go diving and snorkeling in the ocean.
As far as I know, Boracay is very well known for beautiful beaches.

>> As far as I know, Boracay is very well known for its beautiful beaches.

Plus, there are tons of interesting clubs along the coast.

>>CORRECT!

OR >> In addition, there are tons of interesting clubs along the coast.

We can dance and drink some beer at that place.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We can dance and have some beer in that place.

 Next, it has another benefit that they have.

>> Next, it has another benefit.

It\'s more cheap than other places.

>>It\'s cheaper than other places.

Of course, locals are super friendly and hospitable.

>>CORRECT!

OR >> Of course, the locals are really friendly and hospitable.

Foods that they serve are great.

>>The food that they serve is great.
However, it is closed now unfortunately. Cause of the pollution.

>> However, it is unfortunately closed now because of pollution.

But, they are organizing that place.

>>CORRECT!

OR >> However, they are rehabilitating that place.
My bot[이름] line is that Boracay is the best place for a vacation.

>> The bot[이름] line is that, Boracay is the best place for vacation.