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2018-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Would you relocate in another country if you had a chance? Why or why not? Explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences. I want to relocate in Vancouver, Canada if I have an opportunity. Vancouver is the most beautiful country that I've ever visited. There are no racail discrimination and Canadians are very nice. I met a filipina who was an owner of homestay that I stayed in Van. She was very kind and made me feel comfortable during staying.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Layla! ^_^
Thank you for doing your essay homework right away.

I think Vancouver is a nice choice.

My sister will be going to Brunswick, Canada this month and I think she will also have a great time out there.

Canada is a beautiful country. ^_^

I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again on Wednesday!
Take care always

~Teacher Charry :)

I want to relocate in Vancouver, Canada if I have an opportunity.

>> CORRECT!
Vancouver is the most beautiful country that I\'ve ever visited.

>> Vancouver is the most beautiful city that I\'ve ever visited.
There are no racail discrimination and Canadians are very nice.

>> There are no racial discriminations and Canadians are very nice.
I met a filipina who was an owner of homestay that I stayed in Van.

>> I met a Filipina and she was the owner of the home that I stayed at in Vancouver.

She was very kind and made me feel comfortable during staying.

>> She was very kind and she made me feel comfortable during my stay.

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