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Hi, Layla! ^_^
Thank you for doing your essay homework right away.
I think Vancouver is a nice choice.
My sister will be going to Brunswick, Canada this month and I think she will also have a great time out there.
Canada is a beautiful country. ^_^
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again on Wednesday!
Take care always
~Teacher Charry :)
I want to relocate in Vancouver, Canada if I have an opportunity.
>> CORRECT!
Vancouver is the most beautiful country that I\'ve ever visited.
>> Vancouver is the most beautiful city that I\'ve ever visited.
There are no racail discrimination and Canadians are very nice.
>> There are no racial discriminations and Canadians are very nice.
I met a filipina who was an owner of homestay that I stayed in Van.
>> I met a Filipina and she was the owner of the home that I stayed at in Vancouver.
She was very kind and made me feel comfortable during staying.
>> She was very kind and she made me feel comfortable during my stay.
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