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Hi, Layla! ^_^
Thank you for writing an essay tonight.
I agree that beauty has different meanings for different people.
I personally think that for people to become truly beautiful, they should not only look beautiful on the outside but on the inside as well. ^_^
I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you again on Friday.
~Teacher Charry
\'Beauty\' is a comprehensive term that involves various range.
>> \'Beauty\' is a comprehensive term that involves a various range.
I want to emphasize that inner space is the thing when I put the price about \'beauty\'.
>> I want to emphasize that inner space is the thing that I put first when putting a price on \'beauty\'.
It\'s because that it\'s the most important for people to have warm-hearted.
>> It\'s because that is the most important thing for people who are warm-hearted.
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