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ESSAY: What kind of discipline do Korean parents give their children? What is your opinion about corporal punishment? Explain.
Korean parents give their children the carrotand and the stick.
In my case, I was received a lot of love from my parents even though I fail of make a minor mistake.
But when I stealing or spoiling adult, I was greatly comfused by my parents. But they never did corporal punishment.
I think corporal punishment is not help to manage children.
Because children dosen't realizing the error through corporal punishment. When I was elementry student, I've been hit because I was chatting with my friends in class.
Of course it was my fault, but at that time I just annoyed.
If the teacher talk to us what is wrong, why we should not talk in the classroom, I agreed easily.
So, I think corporal punishment is unnecessary thing.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Kelly! Brrrr.. It\'s so cold in here. It\'s still raining. Thank God there are no reports of landslides or accidents brought about by the rain, YET. ^_^ I heard this cool and wet season is also affecting your weather. Cold winds are now passing through your country. That\'s good. ^_^
~T. Irene~
ESSAY: What kind of discipline do Korean parents give their children? What is your opinion about corporal punishment? Explain.
Korean parents give their children the carrot and and the stick.
>>> Correct.
In my case, I was received a lot of love from my parents even though I fail of make a minor mistake.
>>> In my case, I received a lot of love from my parents even though I sometimes fail or make a minor mistake.
But when I stealing or spoiling adult, I was greatly comfused by my parents.
>>> But when I am stealing or just being a spoiled adult, I was scolded by my parents.
But they never did corporal punishment.
>>> But they never gave me any kind of corporal punishment.
I think corporal punishment is not help to manage children.
>>> I think corporal punishment does not help in managing or disciplining children.
Because children dosen\'t realizing the error through corporal punishment.
>>> Because children won\'t realize their mistakes through corporal punishment.
When I was elementry student, I\'ve been hit because I was chatting with my friends in class.
>>> When I was an elementary student, I\'ve been hit because I was chatting with my friends in the class.
Of course it was my fault, but at that time I just annoyed.
>>> Of course it was my fault, but at that time I just got so annoyed.
If the teacher talk to us what is wrong, why we should not talk in the classroom, I agreed easily.
>>> If the teacher told us what was wrong or why we should not talk while the class is going on, I would easily obey.
So, I think corporal punishment is unnecessary thing.
>>> So, I think corporal punishment is an unnecessary thing.
~T. Irene~
ESSAY: What kind of discipline do Korean parents give their children? What is your opinion about corporal punishment? Explain.
Korean parents give their children the carrot and and the stick.
>>> Correct.
In my case, I was received a lot of love from my parents even though I fail of make a minor mistake.
>>> In my case, I received a lot of love from my parents even though I sometimes fail or make a minor mistake.
But when I stealing or spoiling adult, I was greatly comfused by my parents.
>>> But when I am stealing or just being a spoiled adult, I was scolded by my parents.
But they never did corporal punishment.
>>> But they never gave me any kind of corporal punishment.
I think corporal punishment is not help to manage children.
>>> I think corporal punishment does not help in managing or disciplining children.
Because children dosen\'t realizing the error through corporal punishment.
>>> Because children won\'t realize their mistakes through corporal punishment.
When I was elementry student, I\'ve been hit because I was chatting with my friends in class.
>>> When I was an elementary student, I\'ve been hit because I was chatting with my friends in the class.
Of course it was my fault, but at that time I just annoyed.
>>> Of course it was my fault, but at that time I just got so annoyed.
If the teacher talk to us what is wrong, why we should not talk in the classroom, I agreed easily.
>>> If the teacher told us what was wrong or why we should not talk while the class is going on, I would easily obey.
So, I think corporal punishment is unnecessary thing.
>>> So, I think corporal punishment is an unnecessary thing.
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