HW
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!(\",)
You are doing everything you should to be healthy and to improve yourself. I think you will live until 100. (\",)
~T. Lynn
Hi, How are you?
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This is my answer.
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It\'s a start of the week. It\'s Monday.
>> It\'s the start of the week. It\'s Monday.
Even though,it is Monday, it will be happy ~^^
>> Even though it is Monday, it will be a happy one.
Thanks for the check my assignment.
>> Thanks for checking my assignment.
Q1
How much would you be willing to change now to improve your life when you are much older?
I would like to talk about what I do to improve my life.
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As I get older, I normally pay attention to what we eat.
>> As I get older, I normally pay attention to what I eat.
I mean, I try to have some health foods. I typically eat some vegetables for my health.
>> I mean, I try to have some healthy foods. I usually eat some vegetables for my health.
As you know, they are rich in fiber and vitamins.
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Next, I usually go to the fitness center to get some exercise.
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It makes me keep my health. Also i can get good energy.
>> It makes me healthy. I can also get good energy.
Last but not least, I\'ve started to learn English.
>> Last but the least, I\'ve started to learn English.
I am really interested in speaking English.
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I can get a promotion from my office.
>> I can get a promotion at work.
Plus, I normally go for reading books that I like, when I have spare time.
>> In addition, I normally go to the library to read books whenever I have a spare time.
It has become a daily routine.
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So, I do my best as always.
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These are the things I do for my life.
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