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2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hi How are you? This is my answer. It\'s a start of the week. It\'s Monday. Even though,it is Monday, it will be happy ~^^ Thanks for the check my assignment. Q1 How much would you be willing to change now to improve your life when you are much older? I would like to talk about what I do to improve my life. As I get older, I normally pay attention to what we eat. I mean, I try to have some health foods. I typically eat some vegetables for my health. As you know, they are rich in fiber and vitamins. Next, I usually go to fitness center to get some exercise. It makes me keep my health. Also i can get good energy. Last but not least, I\'ve started to learn English. I am really interested in speaking English. I can get a promotion from my office. Plus, I normally go for reading books that I like, when I have spare time. It has become a daily routine. So, I do my best as always. These are the things I do for my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!(\",)

You are doing everything you should to be healthy and to improve yourself. I think you will live until 100. (\",)

~T. Lynn

Hi, How are you?

>> correct!
 This is my answer.

>> correct!
 It\'s a start of the week. It\'s Monday. 

>> It\'s the start of the week. It\'s Monday.
 Even though,it is Monday, it will be happy ~^^

>> Even though it is Monday, it will be a happy one.
 Thanks for the check my assignment.
>> Thanks for checking my assignment.
Q1
How much would you be willing to change now to improve your life when you are much older?

I would like to talk about what I do to improve my life. 

>> correct!
 As I get older, I normally pay attention to what we eat.

>> As I get older, I normally pay attention to what I eat.

I mean, I try to have some health foods. I typically eat some vegetables for my health.

>> I mean, I try to have some healthy foods. I usually eat some vegetables for my health.

As you know, they are rich in fiber and vitamins. 

>> correct!
 Next, I usually go to the fitness center to get some exercise.

>> correct!

 It makes me keep my health. Also i can get good energy. 

>> It makes me healthy. I can also get good energy.
 Last but not least, I\'ve started to learn English.

>> Last but the least, I\'ve started to learn English.

 I am really interested in speaking English.

>> correct!

  I can get a promotion from my office.

>> I can get a promotion at work.

Plus, I normally go for reading books that I like, when I have spare time.

>> In addition, I normally go to the library to read books whenever I have a spare time.
 It has become a daily routine. 

>> correct!
 So, I do my best as always. 

>> correct!
 These are the things I do for my life.

>> correct!

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