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2018-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Hi~^^ how\'s it going? I\'m doing great. As you know, i am staying robotic in Suwon university. It\'s pretty fun. Studying robots is my cup of tea. Anyway I\'m going to do my homework. Q1. What are some gestures you know? Answer in complete sentences. Let\'s me talk about gestures i know. First of all, when we meet my aquntance, we normally shake our hands, meaning that say hello. We can say hello while we are shaking hands. It pretty sample. However, we make sure to shake hands in front of friends or younger generations. We have to bend our head. It could be more polite. I think, that is Korean culture. Plus, when we have a business meeting, we first grap hands each other then shake hands smoothly. Lastly, when we are drinking some alcohol beverages such as beer or soju, we touch our cups. This is called making a toast. We have tons of gestures in my country. Overall, these are the gestures that I know in my country. Thanks a lot!^^ See you later ~ lol

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],


Thank you for doing your homework. ^^


HOMEWORK:


 What are some gestures you know? Answer in complete sentences.


ANSWER:


Let\'s me talk about gestures i know.
First of all, when we meet my aquntance, we normally shake our hands, meaning that say hello. We can say hello while we are shaking hands. It pretty sample. However, we make sure to shake hands in front of friends or younger generations. We have to bend our head. It could be more polite. I think, that is Korean culture.
Plus, when we have a business meeting, we first grap hands each other then shake hands smoothly.
Lastly, when we are drinking some alcohol beverages such as beer or soju, we touch our cups. This is called making a toast.
We have tons of gestures in my country.
Overall, these are the gestures that I know in my country.


CORRECTIONS:


Let me talk about gestures I know. First of all, when I meet my acquaintance, we normally shake hands while saying hello. It\'s pretty simple. Well, here in Korea, we also shake hands with friends or younger generations. We bend our head to be more polite. I think, that is Korean culture. 


Furthermore, when we have a business meeting, we first grasp hands with each other then shake hands smoothly.


Lastly, when we are drinking some alcohol beverages such as beer or soju, we clink our glasses. This is called, \"making a toast.\"  We have tons of gestures in my country.  Overall, these are the gestures that I know in Korea.


** Hi [이름], please take note of the corrections I made in your homework. Have  a good night. ^^


T. Alexia

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