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Hi, [이름]! ^_^

Here\'s the first part of Ted\'s story.
He\'s very pitiful. T_T
~Teacher Charry

Extra episode:Story of Ted

>> Extra episode: The Story of Ted
Ted was born in somewhere.

>> Ted was born somewhere.

He cannot remember his parents.

>> CORRECT!

In his memories he can remember, there was no family there.

>> In his memories he can remember, there was no family for him there.

Instead of his parents, nuns were there for him.

>> Instead of his parents, the nuns were there for him.

Though the nun took care of him carefully, he felt isolated always.

>> Though the nuns took care of him really well, he always felt isolated.

One day, one of his friends asked him to go out.

>> CORRECT!

There was a small hole on the wall of the orphanage.

>> CORRECT!

He was 7years old, but he wondered outside world so that they went out at last.

>> He was 7 years old but he has always wondered about the outside world. They went out at last.

They felt free so walked and walked.

>> They felt free so they walked and walked.

Everything looks amazing because the orphanage was in countryside.

>> Everything looks amazing because the orphanage was in the countryside.

They watched many shops and people in downtown.

>> They watched many shops and people downtown.

However, getting dark, they realized they don\'t know the way back to the orphanage.

>> However, it was getting dark and they realized they didn\'t know the way back to the orphanage.

They cried and fell asleep on the street.

>> CORRECT!

When they opened their eyes next morning, there were a group of boys wathing them.

>> When they opened their eyes the next morning, there was a group of men watching them.

They looked scary and old.

>> CORRECT!

Ted and his friend got scared.

>> CORRECT!

The group took them to their boss.

>> CORRECT!

Ted and his friend wanted to go back to the orphanage but they couldn\'t.

>> CORRECT!

They had to follow the boss.

>> CORRECT!